Monday 20 October 2014

Creative Writing Short Story:Cup Final Day

It was Friday evening, I was in my bedroom preparing for the big match the following day. It would be Broadwalk verses Whitchurch at Ironmould Lane a 1:00pm kick off. I would be playing for Broadwalk who had already wrapped up the league two weeks earlier.

The double was on!

Today was the day, the day where we would find out how good we really are. We had been tested on this cup run. A vital, yet thrilling win in the previous round against Warmley the euphria of that game was huge but now its back to reality for the biggest game of the season.

Kick off was imminent!

The shrill peep of the whistle rang around the ground, the red of Broadwalk in the left stand and the white of Whitchurch opposite. These teams, these two wonderful teams had great respect for each other or so I thought. This game made me realize that the rivalry was bigger than I'd expected. We went 1-0 up and the game heated up the tackles were getting harder and the pace quickening and then...they levelled.

Help me I thought as I wanted to leave the field of play even though we went 2-1 up, help me I don't want to be part of this but then again I did. It doesn't make sense how my mind said leave but my gut said play on and play well. After the second goal the game was a bit of a blur with a yellow card and six more goals as we won 6-2.

The game had been won!

The game had been won yes but the supposed war had only begun as we would meet again when we were promoted, only it was the same name but a different team a new challenge to embark on and one that we would be certain that we would win not only for ourselves but our devoted fans who were really just the parents.


The happiest day since playing at Broadwalk!

Monday 13 October 2014

Coursework Style Models and ideas taken from them

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/sport/football/teams/manchester-united/11142345/Angel-Di-Maria-is-the-shining-light-of-new-look-Manchester-United-and-could-make-them-box-office-again.html

This link will take you to a football article on Manchester United new signing Angel Di Maria and how his impact could see them win silverware once again.

The main ideas that I am taking for my own coursework is the way this article outlines certain comments made by either the players or the managers. They have outlined these comments as they feel that these are very important to the article's reader. I will also use the way that it is set out , because they are set out in paragraphs it is easier to read that if it were a big long block of text. I may also decide to write a newspaper article for an online paper rather than an ordinary broadsheet.

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/travel/travel-writing-competition/11135070/Just-Back-Chicken-run-Derbyshire.html

This link will take you to a travel writing competition on the telegraph website. This piece of travel writing was that particular weeks winner.

The idea that I am going to use if the fact that this piece of travel writing isn't about a glorious holiday to the Caribbean but just a normal village. I will take this idea an write about my trip to Llanelli, Wales to see the newest family member, which is my cousins baby son. I will set this out in paragraphs as it will be easier to read than a large text block and I will integrate lots of imagery to get across what Llanelli looked like while visiting their during a Thursday in the summer.