Some say I'm loud, others say I'm quiet
Some say I'm lazy, others say I'm energetic
Some say I'm annoying especially my brother
But all of these represent me
Some say I'm useful, others say I'm useless
Some say I'm talented, others say I'm untalented
Some say friendly, others say repulsive
But all of these represent me
I may not be the coolest, or the most talented
I may not be the best looking, or the nicest guy
I may have my uses, but I may have no use
But all of these represent me
But it doesn't matter what my peers think
Nor what my friends think
It doesn't matter what my family think
Because there's nobody I'd rather be...
Than Me!
Some say I'm lazy, others say I'm energetic
Some say I'm annoying especially my brother
But all of these represent me
Some say I'm useful, others say I'm useless
Some say I'm talented, others say I'm untalented
Some say friendly, others say repulsive
But all of these represent me
I may not be the coolest, or the most talented
I may not be the best looking, or the nicest guy
I may have my uses, but I may have no use
But all of these represent me
But it doesn't matter what my peers think
Nor what my friends think
It doesn't matter what my family think
Because there's nobody I'd rather be...
Than Me!
A nice use of structure here Callum, lots of content within a short space which is exactly how a poem should be, so well done! When writing in this style in future I would advise playing around with punctuation and sentence structure a bit to try and change it up.
ReplyDeleteWell done!